標題: 創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!! [打印本頁] 作者: 楓葉之影 時間: 2010-4-13 20:07 標題: 創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!!
Actually behind you* D0 U* p! k! K
2 A8 G4 U1 p/ G其實在你背後4 P- o4 U1 r7 ?: C- g. N' y
# F' I" x) g+ a. M6 I8 b! xHas a person to wait for you 4 _5 L; Q" w8 G" h4 B4 G # P$ J3 L5 B; j0 C# m E) G0 f v有個人在等待著妳 ! F+ F: r& Y8 q$ O ' M) Q5 H; C( XBut you actually do not have the feeling 0 R5 A& L4 @2 s& A1 J$ J! ?
$ U- b% c: K3 s7 s: G' W1 [To assume the post what emotion ) {$ M5 g. L5 S2 x+ a9 M8 H5 Y 4 v4 T8 d. F: L8 B3 K) g但你卻沒感覺到任何情感# Z, u% ^7 \$ s' ]7 k
7 E4 ~2 |: B1 |8 ?Before again all nulling operations) P( L {( {3 s# f& L+ t
# u* C" P# H9 B4 h再一切歸零之前' [2 g( F7 H8 _! ^) u
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He wants to say well to you 1 E1 @. o$ _2 x" Z1 |$ s8 s) I9 u F8 N& K v* D
他想好好對你說3 x1 P4 y- q4 R4 D
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I like you ( h* {- R, m; V& q 7 N" G. [- M3 G$ d4 Z. g" d我喜歡妳4 E& _9 J; v4 T6 X3 n
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But you are actually relentless departure . r. y- i( v% A8 Y: e 7 `8 ^/ W2 `/ Z( o但你卻毫不留情的離開 4 w; A9 `6 o: d5 {$ l% N3 y% F: f7 k; j. R
I also can only look at you and others : I. o- i1 v9 N, V) a+ y( j 4 F2 J; G$ g( q& e我也只能看著妳和別人 8 }" b3 v# @3 ^% L% Y, |2 \+ j9 o! ` p5 @5 G; x1 {- u4 t
Is hugging opposite party& y: K5 X# Y" f7 u1 G% a
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擁抱著對方; t* @# @1 ]' D, E5 z6 H1 M
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& t4 A Y) Q& W' h0 v ' j; _: o A! Q8 a" C, F# j因為最近只創作到這邊~!! 7 I% W5 I& V9 Q. J: l; t `- T' ]3 c& v/ J/ W所以~9 w% r( q, U& y) F2 d. Q
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後面有在想到的話會在接上~* S; l t9 i1 [4 w4 y, \
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還有 大家講評看看吧~~
